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Currently there is inequality in the workplace because women usually charge less than men and that is a problem of discrimination that should be addressed.

Women clearly constitute the largest group discriminated against. It is most unusual to find women in jobs with low pay and worst safe. In addition, the unemployment rate has almost always been higher for women.

Men and women tend to work in different sectors of the economy and hold different positions within the same occupational group. There is a tendency for women to be employed in a narrower range of occupations than men and are more likely to work part-time or short-term contracts. They also face more obstacles to the promotion and development of his career. The conclusion is that inequalities still exist.

I think that this is a problem that affects the whole world and should be solved because it is unfair.

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In today%26#039;s world, inequality exists in the workplace because women usually receive lesser salaries than men. This in itself is a problem of discrimination that needs to be addressed.

History has recently brought more freedom for women in regards to voting, holding a job, etc, but discrimination against women still exists. It is most unusual to find women in jobs with high pay, good benefits, and a safe job. The unemployment rate has always been higher for women.

Men and women tend to work in different sectors of the economy and hold different positions within the same occupational group. There is a tendency for women to be employed in a narrower range of occupations than men and are more likely to work part-time or short-term contracts. They also face more obstacles to achieving promotions and developing their careers. The conclusion here is that inequalities still exist.

I think that this is a problem that affects the whole world and should be solved because it allows discrimination to exist.

Do i have written this text correctly?

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first off.. in the first paragraph it says women usually charge less than men is not specific at all. you want your first paragraph to be specific. it should say women are usually paid less than me.

and in the second paragraphy.. it says %26quot;worst safe%26quot; that doesn%26#039;t make sense. you should say %26quot;and an unsafe environment%26quot;

otherwise good :)